Ludicrously Idiotic

Hello there Cassie! I'd like to start off this review by letting you know that I have nothing against 'Vampire Stories', nor do have anything against 'Vampire Love Stories'. And ...

Welcome to Young Writer's Society Madeline! (See, see, I'm writing out the site's full name as a sign of well... thoughtfulness! I'm quite sure you know its full name though ...

This was a rather nice story, I enjoyed the bit of humour you incorporated in it (because honestly speaking here, YWS needs more humour) The 'flow' of your story, I ...

Wow, that was - to simply put it - amazing. The imagery that you evoked was one of magical wonder and I found myself transfixed. “Come on,” I told him, ...

The story was interesting, though I think you could've spruced it up a bit more, maybe provide I bit more insight into the characters through gestures and thought process rather ...

I enjoyed this story. Nice and morbid, just the way I like it. A retired Janitor named John May sat drinking and smoking on his front porch Not much of ...